Talk:Beat Sheet
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[edit] Old Discussions
[edit] Chapter One
I think the idea of the boys' dad in the restaurant business is new, but probably a better fit than what his character description has right now? Maybe we should change it? 71.61.82.127 13:16, 8 May 2008 (UTC)
I also like the idea that they don't wander off intentionally, but that it's part of the trip. 71.61.82.127 13:17, 8 May 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Private investigator
I really, really hate the idea, and think it's just complicating matters. Can we ditch it? Finaldraft 15:23, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
[edit] General Plot Idea
Now my first thought about this logline was, Hansel and Gretel Retold. I kind of like the idea, it could be fun. Before anybody starts; I'd like to emphasize again the Retold part. Hansel and Gretel would just be a frame, it would still be completely original. I personally like the challenge of Making Hansel and Gretel a grown up story. What do you guys think?
- Interesting idea, it could definitely be a reference for the rest of the story
- I like it to, but admit the only thing I really know about Hansel and Gretel is what I've seen in other "retold" versions like the Simpsons -- how sorry is that? What features of Hansel and Gretel do you think would be could to try and incorporate? Justin /
(Talk to me) 12:42, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
